Showing posts with label Secondary English. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Secondary English. Show all posts

Friday, May 2, 2014

FEATURE FRIDAY 5/2 - Crushing Customary Common Core with Julie Conlon



Gina, Your Host of PerfettoWritingRoom,
RIGHT, my new friend Julie Conlon and
beautiful daughter Rory!

Has May actually come again? Here at the PerfettoWritingRoom, it's Friday once again. The time when we get to do some of our favorite things: talk secondary English, classroom joys and challenges, make new friends and discuss great ways to improve our classrooms. 

Before we do much of anything get your morning cup of coffee ready. I just made some banana bread with raisins because my husband hates nuts (so why'd he marry me? Am I right?) Should I give ya a minute? Let's get this place percolating!




1. Odd and Brilliant Ways to Use the Common Core in May, when, you know what? The student just aren't having it . . .!
                              visit my store    

 I LOVE nothing more than a great writing prompt that PROVES the inestimable value of poetry or fiction writing. I also love nothing more than proving all those nosy parkers, extra chefs in the kitchen, or spoon stirrers who want to say that such writing is fun, "has its place," but otherwise is useless and is without rigor, or that say there aren't many common core applications.

I know for a fact that after disciplined and targeted poetry and short fiction writing, students often feel an ease in the essay format, as if there is somehow "more room" for them to write, and it is suddenly a simpler format than they remember. This is true across the curriculum, whether students write in history class or art class or in biology.
      I put out a product called "Story Starter Prompts with Research and Argument Tie- Ins" - I love this product because it proves that while going through a fiction writing activity, you can use and have students gain mastery in common core standards usually reserved for essay writing. Let's be honest - a type of writing they just don't want to do in March, April, May, and June.
Please look at it here.



I'll do ya one better, and argue that rigorous poetry and short fiction writing can actually be more difficult than some types of essay writing. I'll accept the hate mail, but in the meantime, consider the difficulty involved in organizing a story that FAR from being a formulaic "list your three points and your three reasons with a graphic organizer" (I know that I am simplifying, so forgive me) must consider spelling and grammar just as they would in any other writing assignment, plus organization, back story, realism or purposeful lack of realism, possibly research, logic, cause and effect, explanation and argument all in one story depending on the needs of the particular elements within. Let us not even begin to talk about symbolism, or characters, pacing, believable dialogue. . .should I go on? Is this NOT critical thinking? Are there not applicable common core standards?

ANY poetry of writing prompt you do can have caveats in them. These caveats can be guidelines. And yes these caveats can be aligned with the common core, but I guarantee you that the students will be motivated.


Fickle, Fickle May - And Wonderful New Friend and Lifesaver Julie Conlon
2. How Does Julie Conlon Use Common Core?
When Julie isn't at Disney World or at dance class with her daughter Rory, AND, when she isn't working very hard on Pinterest, she is cooking up really unbelievable lifesaving literacy assessment items like this one. Have you never been to her store? Here's what it looks like and I do ask you, please go for a little visit. Click, Like, download a freebie, say hi. Be neighborly!

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The more I write these articles, the HAPPIER I am to do them. I so deeply enjoy having the opportunity to learn and grow as a result of meeting new secondary English teachers.

The Common Core - a Metaphor!
The common core is a BEAR. A lumbering, clawed, not very sophisticated beast.  To work around the bear you don't have many options. You can run, play dead, but only the truly great come up with something original. The great Bill Cosby joked about killing one with a loose leaf notebook. But then I met the great Julie Conlon who killed it with ingenuity and a great resource


 Much like my Story Starter Prompts that use the Common Core Standards through an unexpected creative writing activity,

Julie Conlon's Formative Assessment Exit Slips are so much more than what you think they are. In terms of making a FUN, usable and flexible Common Core Product, these exit slips hit the mark. They bring down that bear right in the belly (with honey everybody - I love animals!).

What they are not: 
- One dimensional or one-note (write what you don't understand)
- Obligatory (As you walk out, hand these over!)
- Rigid (Here is how they must be used)
*There's nothing wrong with any of those above, but take a peek at the review below.


Let's look at little at this tamed animal. 

See me in Julie's Store so you can look at a preview.



What This Product IS: 
- Based on literacy strategies (Julie was a literacy coach)
- for middle or high school, in any subject where you want to assess
   for understanding and nuances in understanding and critical 
   thinking
- Created and intended as exit slips with unbelievably simple print
  and go forms for you to fold and make into your own little "brain 
  station" anywhere in your classroom and students.
- BUT, respectfully, in my opinion, can be used AS YOU see fit, as
   part of a lesson, or as the lesson (it really is that rich with ideas). 
- Ideal this time of year, but absolutely can be used all year long.
- All common-core aligned reading assessments, with a handy 
   reference guide for the teacher. You know what standard each 
   slip will address. How genius is that. How much less work for 
   you?

Chatting with Julie after I had actually reviewed this resource, what most struck me was the thought, care, and love that went into the product. The multitude of students' learning needs, thinking strategies, and forms of expression seemed to all be accounted for on these slips. It seemed to address all the different learning styles, while helping students show what they know and explain where they got confused. Of course there is more, all the subtle nuances: predicting, pro and con, summarizing, making inferences, and so much more. 
     The more I looked the more impressed I was. I saw how indispensable this would be in any classroom where reading took place (is there a classroom where reading doesn't take place?).  Instead of each week laboriously tackling a new Common Core standard, it was all there on little slips.

Question: How did you do it? 
Answer: The "first draft" of the product (also still available in my store) was my reading strategy exit slips.  I used these to monitor my students' independent reading progress--they were all reading different books, so I needed a way to evaluate their progress that would work for any text.  I based them off of the reading strategies in Strategies That Work by Stephanie Harvey and Anne Goudvis (making connections, questioning, predicting, making inferences, etc.). 


Question: When did you first come up with the idea for a resource that would cover so many literacy assessment needs?
Answer: This set was created when I found myself in my new role as a literacy coach.  Teachers of all subjects were asking for ways to monitor their students' reading comprehension.  I adapted my "fiction-based" exit slips and added more general strategies to create this product.  In the product, you'll see that I give suggestions for using each of the 20 different slips--most instructions include ways to use it with reading or with general classroom lessons.  I even use them in professional development workshops to gauge participants' understanding!   


Question: I hope we have regular workaday teachers and some TPT teacher-sellers reading today, too. Do you have any advice for making products?

Answer: Thanks, Gina. One thing I realized by exploring other stores is that everything is an option. I forget sometimes that ideas/products that are just part of my everyday routine as a veteran teacher could be very useful to a new teacher. I'm trying to look at my files from the perspective of someone new to the profession--what can I share that will make their lives easier than mine was in those first few years?

So whether you are a NEW TEACHER, a BUSY one, or even a TPT seller yourself, pop in to Julie Conlon's store. See her best-selling product. Just click on the live link above. JULIE will be having a SALE. There is no better time than to give your students the gift of learning!


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BEFORE WE GO. . .
QUESTION FOR ALL YOU READERS - 
WHAT IS THE BEST, most intriguing and fun or unexpected way to use the Common Core Standards in your secondary (or Middle School) classroom? How do YOU kill that bear??  

Friday, April 18, 2014

FEATURE FRIDAY #3: Getting Cozy! The Close Read with Sara Fuller, Gina and Coffee. . .


I'm your host, Gina of the PerfettoWritingRoom(c), store at teacherspayteachers.com and this cozy little blog, where friends meet to talk about TpT and my favorite subjects: English, language and writing.

It's April so let's talk about poetry, and close reading, the coziest of all types of reading.

CLOSE READING - is reading for understanding, though that understanding is one that moves from a simple read-through and "look up the definitions" type of understanding, to a more nuanced approach that is based on LAYERS. There is no strict order in which to follow a close reading process, though the list may look something like this. Keep in mind that EACH article in the list may require you to read again:

  • a simple read through
  • a reading while circling unfamiliar words. These must be looked up and you will read through again, understanding the text as a whole
  • summarizing or rewriting the text in your own words (not required, but this proves your understanding)
  • Noting words that demonstrated sound devices (assonance, consonance, alliteration, etc)
  • Figurative language, metaphor, simile, synecdoche, metonymy, personification, pathetic fallacy, and more)
  • Rhetorical devices 
  • Noting Structure (this includes - meter, rhyme scheme, or stanza, but may also include parallel structure, repetition, internal rhyme, and more) 
  • Tone - in particular the author or speaker's attitude toward the subject or characters being spoken about in the poem
  • Diction (word choice, level, usage).
  • OTHER - this may include historical, cultural, or background information known about the writer, if the piece is known to be semi-autobiographical or not, the period in which it was written or other elements that might enrich the reader's understanding or "reader response" to the poem.
THE Goal of the close read is to have a deeper appreciation and understanding of your text, in this case, your poem. AND, as the goal of most schools and colleges in to advance written and spoken communication, students should be able to write about what they now know or have learned about the poem through classroom discussion and then, a paper.

Sara Fuller is always having some crazy adventure or other


                                              Visit My Store - Ms. Fuller's Teaching Adventures!




Whether her adventure is teaching, coming up with some new product for her store on teacherspayteachers,  or hanging out with her cat Titus (you DID know Titus is short for Titus Andronicus, from Shakespeare, right?) Sara is always up to something.
       Sara left her post over at TpT, and her home not far from Cleveland to make a little pit stop at the PerfettoWritingRoom and have a little cup of coffee with me .  .   .

Is it me, or do English-loving folks the world over always have things in common? 


  • First of all . . . I had a black cat, I named him Horace after you guessed it, Horace Walpole, given credit for the first Gothic novel (though it's not very good). 
  • We both love travel. Sara is planning on going to California and Scotland this summer! Don't you just wish you could go too? I lived in San Diego for awhile . . . let me tell you, it's a great place, and I have visited many many countries. . .though I'm not going anyplace this year :(
  • And both of us have worked very hard in our respective teaching fields, performing in various roles and positions proving our worth and versatility along the way. Ms. Fuller, from "Ms. Fuller's Teaching Adventure's started her career "at an alternative high school," where she "then moved onto an alternative/special education school" and taught multiple subjects to grades 7-12. She adds that she "taught at a charter school where I taught 7th and 8th grade. This year I'm teaching writing courses at the local community college and I love it." 
  • Sara also loves "taking photographs [and] reading YA literature." Would you be shocked if I told you I did too? Yeah, I didn't think so. . .

Apparently, Ms. Fuller, from Ms. Fuller's Teaching Adventures is wonderful at making CLOSE READ Products as well. . .  

which happens to be one of my favorite activities from being in grad school and teaching college. When I saw this product and reviewed it, what really struck me was its versatility. See the pics below.



                           Ms. Fuller's Product (Cover)                                A Marked Up Page!


Not only does Ms. Fuller's Teaching Adventures offer 6 poems, the product is organized according to GRADE appropriate poetry, offers task cards, keys, and makes the entire process versatile (sort of like Sara herself). It seems Ms. Fuller agrees on its versatile and adds that "This is one of my very favorite products.  Though each poem has a recommended grade level they can be mixed and matched to your students' needs.  In addition there are task cards and for some poems multiple variations of the questions to allow for differentiation."

Though the cover SAYS it can be used for grade 6-12, this product has VERY SUCCESSFULLY been used at the college level. It includes five steps for understanding and analysis, "Ode on a Grecian Urn,"  "Ozymandias" and four other poems (I don't want to give away all the goodies)  and while this can be used all year long, we teachers just love using poetry at the end of the year. 

Now is the best time to pick it up  : )

My coffee is just about finished, but Sara told me she'll be having a sale. If you'd like stop by and see her store. Pop in say hi. It's very nice over there! 


VISIT US AGAIN ON TUESDAY (TpT Tips Tuesday)
And EVERY FRIDAY for Feature Friday - Secondary English Teachers from TpT!

WE'll KEEP the Coffee Brewing! 

Gina - ThePerfettoWritingRoom
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Friday, April 4, 2014

FEATURE FRIDAY: Don't Write About Your Writing!!! And Other Great Writing Tips


The most wonderful part of being a contributor to TeachersPayTeachers is learning even more about teaching, and meeting other wonderful writing teachers!

ARE YOU a TEACHER - ARE YOU a WRITER? How about Some Writing Tips? Here you go, hot off the press.

 I want to share with you a small but invaluable activity I came across that was so simple, so clever and so TRUE that I began to laugh when I saw it.


Literary Sherri
Sherri - "Literary Sherri" - A Teacher Bio
An amazing, lovely woman, a 20-years'+ teacher, Sherri Munger-Tyler works harder than most and like me values students, their leaps of understanding, the importance of the scaffold method, new ideas, and yes, her own education (she has three degrees to her name). And she loves writing and literature products and creating useful items others will love. 


FANTASTIC Writing Tip From Our Featured Teacher - Don't WRITE ABOUT YOUR WRITING!!!

Don't Write About Your Writing: Mini-Lesson (Common Core Aligned)


Sherri knows a thing or two about "writing about your own writing."  She made the product you see above. I saw it, I smiled. This is a 12-page product and can be accomplished easily in one class period. 


Have YOU written about your own writing? If you're a teacher, do your STUDENTS write this.....?

1. What I mean to say is...
2. The reason I wrote this is. . .
3. In my opinion . . .
4. The purpose of this paper is to . . .
5. What I plan to do is . . .
              Or other "writing about writing phrases?"

Sherri's product lists all of the ways writers can overwrite and end up explaining their writing, as opposed to explaining the point at hand. (Just SAY it!)

It gives examples of overwriting, or "explained writing" as well as an appropriate improved version - MY personal favorite thing to do. Explain and show, is what I always say!

It provides students the opportunity to differentiate between examples. It's a short product and incredibly thorough product, essential and immediately successful in helping students correct their tendency to explain.


A TAKEAWAY TIP From Gina @ the PerfettoWritingRoom, and ....


One that Sherri agrees with Too!!

Literary Sherri

My students ALWAYS ALWAYS ask: "Ms. Perfetto how long does this have to be?" 

           Long enough to have a beginning, middle and end. 
          
           Long enough to do what you need to do.

           Long enough to accomplish the task, but not longer.


Once students have a PAGE number in their head, the paper might just be filled with fluff and overwriting. Yikes!! ( I should mention, I always tell them to please stop asking me that. They ask anyway. . .)


WE Will leave YOU with a Question: 
How do YOU answer students when they ask you "How long does this have to be?"
Do you have a clever retort?